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for Moonlight Café

by SaiyanPrincessKiara

schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept of the story, but it just
seems so sweet. I don't know how to place it.
I do wish the chapters were a little longer
too... But everything is well written. The
format is beautiful too. I think you're a
great writer, I'm just used to a little more
zazz. (Zazz? Lol.) Keep up the story.
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far! I love Kagome's commentary of how things came about. please continue this story!
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a awesome story and i would love to hear from you if and when you update again so i can see what happens next! it would be much appreciated... i think i spelled that wrong