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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work , looking forward to the rest.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not a bad start.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is going to be a wonderful story. I cant wait to read more of what you have in store for Inuyasha and Sesshomaru.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this! It has a nice balance of angst. The only thing is, that you may want to have some spaces between your paragraphs. It might make reading it a little better.
Other than that, good job!
B reading U!
Other than that, good job!
B reading U!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if this is your first story you are doing a hell of a good job.