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by Sabriel20

person mamarita
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has lots of potential. I can't wait to see what happens next- 1st 6 chapters are really quite good. Please update soon. DLS
person nchsmi
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sisn't thonl you'd ever come back!
Nice chappie! B reading U!
person ladyreadsalot
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the chapters are nice, as is the plot ^^
but..i know u've heard this before, but the chapters are a little short...
besides that, the whole story is very good.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok now we are getting to the tick of things
person Harlequin
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Haaa how I love this story X3
Keep it up ^__^
Faithfully,
Harlequin, Masked Deciever
person Harlequin
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wereboyscout@gmail.com

Good story I must admit.
You didn't abuse the characters or their possibilites.
Sesshomaru didn't studdenly become a sweet heart over night
and Inuyasha didn't suddenly throw caution and reason to the wind and start screwing everything in sight
XD
Appreciate it~
Please continue, I look forward to a fourth chapter soon
~Harlequin, Masked Deciever
person Tsuzuki Sato
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was alright - but what the hell was up with the next two? Chapter Two had all the text clumped together to it was impossible to read, and chapter three was so short I didn't even bother.
person shivonne
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like a lot u fool me I got so excited about a new chapter but i understand about finals I had one today. good luck and update soon.
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you never updated T__T
person szaugg
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is looking like an interesting story. Poor, poor Inuyasha - he's had such a crappy life! Poor little guy.