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very cool story.
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Thanks for updating! The chapter was well worth the wait! B reading U!

Thank you for the update I thought that you were going to finish this fic.

I like your story and am looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't think you should change the chapter, it's fine, but I would make sure you progress the plot in the next one. You have shown really well, the animosity between the brothers, and hints that Sesshoumaru possibly cares about InuYasha but doesn't realize. InuYasha on the other hand seems to dislike his brother more as a response to Sesshoumaru's treatment of him, he seems like he would respond if only Sesshoumaru showed him a bit of kindness.

I feel bad for poor InuYasha, it sounds like he's had a terrible life. I think Sesshy is getting angry with him because he really feels guilty, for everything his little brother has experienced. It's a good angsty story so far.

You have done an awesome job of doing exactly what you're supposed to do at the beginning of a story: establishing the characters, and basic plot. I would would be very happy with that chapter if I were you.

That sucks that you have to go on the computer covertly, I'm so glad I'm not that young anymore.

Anyway, great chapter, I'll be loking forward to the next.

hmm, have i reviewed this before? i dont remember, but i have to say it's a great story. keep up the good work and please update soon.

I'm enjoying this story greatly. I hope that you continue it and that the next chapter comes soon!

Excelent writing on your part! Don't put your writting down you're doing great! I look forward to the next chapter your mind and muse come up with! Oh and nice job with Rin and Inu it's almost about time some one went in this type of direction! Yes at least to me you kept Sess in character!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING

chapter 6 was great. and about sesshomaru character considering he
insulted inuyasha from start to finish, you definitedly had him
in character. although i thought you should have let inuyasha do
a bit more character assissnation when he was talking to rin. just
saying sesshomaru only cares about himself just wasn't enough. i want
inuyasha to get down and dirty now i believe that would have fitted
sesshomaru's anger when he sent rin away and attacked inuyasha.
and when sesshomaru returned to the room i thought for sure inuyasha
would have jumped out the window and made a break for it.

anyway, i am so looking forward to the next chapter.

Good story, useable plot line. I would like to see where this story goes.