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by Sabriel20

person Ann
schedule March 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I enjoyed soo much your narration, makes me wanna know how it all unfolds.

As a feedback I might have saw somethimes where you are not as much in control of the characters the way they really are in their original environment, even if this is very much appart of the original Inuyasha story, I was able to tell the sorroundings, their personalities, the other characters, the new situations they're presented in, are very much belivable thanks to your skills. Of course you can improve, but so far this is great. PLEASE continue.  

schedule January 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sabriel!!! Fate must have brought me here!!! OMG Thank you for adding care and LOVE to your baby That chapter was INCREDIBLE!!! I seriously lucked up and happen to see a added chapter! I was going through and clearing old bookmarks in my browser. I scan the contents to make sure I finishrd the fic before deciding what to do with it! I swear if this site had a subscribe button I would sub to you and be there front and c enter for every chapter!!! all i can hope for is a favor? would you pleeeease email me when you post another, so I don't miss your awesome creative talents? I would be forever grateful!!

amadderhatter <at symbol> protonmail <dot> com

between the bracketts goes @ and the other a .

some sites remove addresses for some odd reason.. so I spaced it out and used clues to get it to you! email me anytime!! Thank you again for loving your fic and allowing it to receive love from us as well!!!

person Kit-kit
schedule December 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter. I hope inuyasha can survive seeing sesshonaru memories. 

schedule December 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am always amazed at the different story lines and plots fans can create.   I haven’t read anything like this yet.  I do hope you finish it,   I find it fascinating.

schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

WhooHooo!!! I found another one!!! One I have found an InuSess treasure I haven't the privilege of devouring yet!! It's becoming a rare occasion!!

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schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Damn!! I've heard MANY Interpretations of how Sesshomaru got so cold and hateful... This one is new to my mind. Very interesting take!

schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh man!! I LOVE the son & moon story!! Did you create that yourself or is it part of a cultural lore? That was so neat how you tailored it to fit Sessh n' Yasha's personas either way! Cool! Thank you for sharing this!

schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Omg... At first I was glad InuYasha got some revenge... Now I feel bad for Sessh...

schedule December 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OMG WHERE IS THE REST!!!????? Oh kami... Please don't do This!!!

schedule August 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

please tell me there is more coming for this wonderful story??? I am enjoying it profoundly!!!!