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for A New Beginning

by vikikibouki

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could always get Sesshomaru to threaten your computer to work. It was a good chapter in spite of the typos. Look forward to the next chapter and lemon.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know how you feel. I'm a HUGE review hypocrite... I demand them for my stuff, but then I don't review anyone else's!

This story is really good so far, its a fresh approach to a very popular scenario between these two. Keep going, I love it!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 3 and it was pretty good even though it was a bit short. I also know what it's like not to get reviews for your fic. Been on that end myself. Look forward to the lemon and the next chapter.
person Patty530
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Love the changes to Chapter 1. This is an amazing beginning. Keep it up.
Luv;
Patty
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you did the addition on chapter 1. Chapter 2 was great and look forward to chapter 3.
person Patty530
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful..I'm glad it's going to be more than a oneshot.
Luv;
Patty
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow great start so far I can't wait to find out what happens next are the eye's the eye's of sesshoumrau and the eye's of someone else? hmm...
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! I hope its not a oneshot, it really needs a second chapter to be complete! :)
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is nice fluffy fic. Haven't read one of these in awhile. You should do a second chapter. It will make this fic more complete.