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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to read the rest.
schedule
September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing style hun. Great start! I'd love to read more of what your creative mind has instored. Thank you for sharing!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realy enjoyed reading your story. I loved how in character it all seemed, and lets not forget your grammer, punctuation, and spelling were fantastic! Nothing kills the mood quicker for me than shity writing. I'll be watching for updates!
Cassandra
Cassandra
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's ok so far. I would love to see more. On the ch. 2 I was little confused. When Inu and Kag hugging; are they still in her room? or did they went back and told Sang and Mir what happen then hug each other?
I hope you udate soon. I would love to read ch 3 and more! Keep it up! Take care!
Suniko
I hope you udate soon. I would love to read ch 3 and more! Keep it up! Take care!
Suniko
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i got that sweet warm fuzzy feeling. a tender moment skillfully portrayed.
a pleasure,
ginny
a pleasure,
ginny
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Luv;
Patty
Luv;
Patty
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet
watch homophones and malapropisms! one example: feat feet. other than that it's very well written.
thank you,
ginny
watch homophones and malapropisms! one example: feat
thank you,
ginny
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your help~
Yeah, I'll have to watch out for those x3
I woke up really early after about 4 or so hours of sleep @_@;;..so I dieded..-laughs-
Please keep the Reviews and the Ratings coming ^_^ They help a bunch
♥
.:D:.
Yeah, I'll have to watch out for those x3
I woke up really early after about 4 or so hours of sleep @_@;;..so I dieded..-laughs-
Please keep the Reviews and the Ratings coming ^_^ They help a bunch
♥
.:D:.