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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sounds good so far, what happens next?
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful beginning but when is the next chapter coming?
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very insightful
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh ok so what happens to the monk. keep writing.
ladytokyo
ladytokyo
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start... wrapping everything up in a nice little package, so you can concentrate on 1 or 2 characters! Can't wait to read more!
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're off to a good start, I'd say. The only thing is, I don't know when who is speaking. I mean you can kind of figure it out, but it would be much clearer with a 'Inuyasha said' or something like that. Other than that, I'm interested to see where you're going with this.