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please write more on this. i wanna know what happens?!?!?

This was a much needed chapter. I'm going to guess that this means we'll get a peek at what happened that night in detail - which has me excited. 8) I like this Sesshoumaru. He is protective, and yet also still the bloodthirtsy youkai that he can be. The closet scene where she was hiding was suspenceful. I could feel her fear.

You absolute tease.

Run, Chaste Virgin, run!

Okay, now that the intial reaction is over, I am interested to see how far Kagome allows her mind to be indoctrinated into his instinctual sexuality. While I am truly going to enjoy the lemon that the next chapter contains (unless you are more of a tease than I thought), what I hope you delve into is how her pysche begins to accept what it means to be his.

We know that she has because she allowed him to take her in a club, I just wonder how she goes from a 15 year old virgin to an exhibitionist. I don't know if exhibitionist is correct, but I can think how to put it properly.

I hope all is well with you and I will be looking forward to your next update.

Emily

This is a really good story! I'm hooked. Please update again soon!

I love your stories and can't wait for more... I am more of a muse then a writer, and i have had this plot bunny in my head since i read shadowsweaver's sin's of the father and tears of the fallen, so i present this challenge to you to do with as you like whether you can work it, or know someone else that is willing! Okay so it starts where kagome gets sent back further in time back to before sesshomaru's birth, she is 17 and has not yet resolved the shikon problem, she falls in love with inutaisho, the great dog general himself, kagome having the raw power but not the control to match him gains respect as his mate, however she can not have children nor will she age until she returns to her proper age. inutaisho with kagome's knowledge and consent get's another mate - sesshomaru's mother, of course his mother is a nasty peice of work chosen by her bloodline, she resents kagome's position in the household and lords it over kagome that she can give birth to an heir. when sesshomaru is born she poisons his mind against kagome, but despite this kagome becomes close to sesshomaru, but later he blames his mothers death on kagome and then begins to dislike his father because despite what he feels for kagome at the time he still likes her deep down... and when inutaisho throws everything away for izayoi he see's it as an affront to himself... which explains his strong dislike of inuysha. eventually sesshomaru recognizes his duty to continue the western lands and marry's the lady of the western lands (kagome) as is proper in the pack structure, however first he must convince her to do it because up till now she has seen him as a son. by the time of the jewel shard fiasco kagome was sent away for safety until younger kagome is gone. when time meets up again... it can be in the future or a day after kagome left for the farther past.... and from there it can go anywhere, but the meat of the story is focused on sesshomaru's ever changing and evolving relationship with kagome. who he does not recognize at first as the girl that travels with his brother...

My fav Sess/Kag story of all time. Hope you come back soon with more !

Beautiful fic. I almost taught you wouldn´t continue. I love your style. It´s so romantic, sexy, humorous and refreshing. Not the sad, dark stuff you get to read every day. Thank you for this astonishing story.
Just one thing: Must you always cut Sesshoumaru´s hair? ;-b

Yeah, you are back. I love the stories that have references that force me to remember my time in school. It great please keep update as often as possible.

Emily

Hello ^_^

I just wanted you to know that I love your stories. They are well written and fun to read. I hope you will update this and your other stories soon. I really hope you will update "Through The Mirror" soon. It is my favorite.

Progression has an really interesting twist to it, and I wonder what will happen next.

Love ^_^

This is a amazing story! I absolutely love it! Even though it's just got a few chapter's onto it for now I can tell it's going to have a AMAZING ending!