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by Rashke

schedule February 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

sorry you did not continue this story  it's really good

schedule February 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just recently returned to my Inuyasha love after many years adrift. I came upon this story and really, truly enjoyed it. You did a wonderful job of indulging in the rich, shy, and deep character development / play between the two. I felt like I was watching an intense, provocative tennis match between past and present. The different POVs filled in additional depth. I would have loved the decadence of many more chapters, watching the couple as they forge their path. As it is, it sharply stands alone. Thanks for the tremendous read! 

schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOved your stories. Have just started reading a couple of months ago and am glad to come across your stories. Loved your characterization of Sesshomaru. You have got him so right. HOpe you continue the next chapter soon.
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my FAVORITE stories. I love the scene where he is showing his dad his tatoos. That thought of what he looks like right there is a favorite of mine. So hot! The amount of detail you put in when describing the steamy scenes makes them exceptionally vivid. More like this please!
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredibly delicious. I love your portrayal of Sess and Kagome, their relationship to one another. It's incredibly unique and intense and outright amazing. I'm happy you didn't reduce Sessh's beast to a mindless idiotic thing. I love the moral ambiguity in which you describe him, it's luscious. I think you just described every woman's bad boy fantasy. That's so bad |D
person JamieGib
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is the best story I've ever read on this site. You choose your words and craft your sentences very carefully, I can tell. Your writing is a thousand times more sexy and sensual than a hundred repetitions of 'cock' and 'pussy' could be. This portrayal of Kagome and Sesshomaru manages to keep her own personality (albeit a little less stubborn than usual) and reintroduces the concept of the 'killing perfection' as the demon that he really is. I think I could read your story over and over again because the depth of detail and the skill with which it was written make it a definite classic...not just for Kag/Sess fans, but for fans of finely crafted fiction everywhere. And I ain't just saying that, either!
person Trelweny
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Absolutely love it! The visuals are just... wow. O_O Normally I'm not a fan of cutting Sesshomaru's long locks and yet you've painted a rather succulent short hairstyle for my favorite daiyoukai along with a sweet process of getting the hairstyle that not only do I not mind the change, I rather like it. ^_^

The non-linear flow of this story is interesting, if a little confusing for some readers to comprehend at first. I personally love how with a bit of pause for thought the relationship's timeline becomes increasingly clear and precise. It's absolutely beautiful watching how and when Kagome and Sesshomaru's friends and family catch on to the nature their true relationship. Particularly after their very sweet beginning.

I can hardly wait to read more, to see how their other friends react as they figure it out.

Oh... and I totally love Kagura with BOTH Ginta and Hakkaku. ^_^ Me-OW. *laughs*

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yey.......finaly an update, (does a happy dance). A wonderful chapter, fianly I get to know what happend to make them mates. All that is missing now is an update to Idiot's guide and all would be perfect.

Please update soon. ^_^
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting for updates~ Yours stories are some of the best Sess/Kags out there, and this is leaves your so... on edge! Please, I want to hear the next part! ;3;
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would very much like to know if/when this story will be updated again, or if you have discontinued (that would be very sad!).