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for The Brother

by Ems

person Anon
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far!! It's cool to see new pairings, and I can't wait to see where these twisting paths are leading! I hope you write more soon. No pressure, though. ;)
person Jade
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep on writing. I really want to read what will happen next.
Thanks
Jade
person mamarita
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First 3 chapters are very interesting and a nice way to wrap up what happened to the gang after Naraku was killed off- without having to mention his name, of course. I like the idea of the pairings you have. Please continue!
person bears24
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I like the whole memory loss twist you've thrown in. Can't wait to see where this story goes!
person szaugg
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well I'm so glad I checked this out. It looks very interesting and I'm really curious to see what happened, and what's going to happen. Souta's personality and inner dialogue was very entertaining!