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OMG!
this has definitely got to be in my top 4 most-loved InuYasha fanfics!
the story line,the plot,the loving.wow.you made my day.i love your writing style,too-how you keep the readers wanting for more. =]

Great Job, Sweetie! Perfect ending. Loved every word. This tale of yours went from a guilty pleasure to one of my favorites. Since I'm also following your story "No Ordinary Love", I'll be checking out your older stories. Are they all on AFF?

Thanks. With Luv;
Patty

i liked this story it had an ending unlike some of the other stories some oneshots have no end .i feel that all stories should have a beginning middle and an end. some of thes stories are incomplete i hope you make alot more stories like this one.there are other on adultfanfiction that have great story lines but new chapters are slow and some have not been worked on in 3 years but when i read this story and you added chapters 1 a day and once 3 inone day which was terrific i like the graphic descriptions and it kept me interested thats the make of a great story .

awwww that's the end of the story?
But i wan more
*whines**pouts**has a tantrum**gives cookie for bribe* please?

Oh Damn! The end, really? Great chapter hun. I've enjoyed every word of the whole tale. You did great! Thanks for such a fun ride.

Luv, as always;
Patty

Oh sure, end it like that. I want to know where Kagome is going to take him!

Ah hell. Lets just hope it's somewhere more private than the elevator this time. :) I love that it's Kagome getting aroused and wanting this time. Great Chapter.

Luv;
Patty

this fic keeps getting better and better

Aww that is so sweet ... Love the last scene.

Omg...I love this story so much. I can't wait for the next chapter!!