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August 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame that this fic was abandoned. I absolutely love your choice of villain. And it's got great drama. You're an excellent writer except for the fact that so many were left undone. Please finish. Hojo has always been creepy to me. He's the kind of guy who acts real nice only to start you in the back or go all psycho on you. And the three terrors egging him on like they do is really not cool. Kudos for a great start.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. I love it when authors use serious subject material and take it seriously. It's always a breath of fresh air.
There's a few little issues with some spelling and grammar, but nothing a little proof read won't fix :}
I really look forward to this continuing.
There's a few little issues with some spelling and grammar, but nothing a little proof read won't fix :}
I really look forward to this continuing.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Plot good, spelling/word choice in lots of places bad, ridicules from chapter 1 for instance should be ridiculous. Really needs a spellcheck & maybe beta'ing.