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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, but find myself wanting more. I'd it finished or are you going to add more?
Amiti
Amiti
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In ur fic, reviewing it. Other than the fourth wall breaking and a few pacing issues, this was a really nice story! I love the concept that you played with and the slang was well done!
(The pacing issues might actually be due to me reading really fast, but whatever.)
Ultimate favorite quote? This:
"“It’s also impolite to rig your jimmy while you have guests at your place too,” InuYasha retorted sarcastically. Shippo made a whine of disgust at that comment, and Kagome turned red and replied, “Can we please talk about something else besides rigging…jimmies?” Just the whole context it was put in was embarrassing for her to repeat. "
(The pacing issues might actually be due to me reading really fast, but whatever.)
Ultimate favorite quote? This:
"“It’s also impolite to rig your jimmy while you have guests at your place too,” InuYasha retorted sarcastically. Shippo made a whine of disgust at that comment, and Kagome turned red and replied, “Can we please talk about something else besides rigging…jimmies?” Just the whole context it was put in was embarrassing for her to repeat. "
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!
I havent stopped reading since the first chapter!
please write another chapter!
I havent stopped reading since the first chapter!
please write another chapter!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooooooow!! great story u got going here!! i looveee it!!! ahh the way u wrote it was soo COOL! haha i love that she's a hit man... NICE haha hope you update soon!