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for You have brought this upon yourself

by Meggiez

schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAHH! I'm totally loving this. And let me tell you- I do NOT go for this kind of stuff. T_T I feel so dirty and perverted and-! And-! I love it regardless! ToT lmao.

Ahh, as for the manga... they better update soon, I wanna know how Sesshomaru uses Bakusaiga! *weeps*

Anyway! lol I look forward to how the next chapter will go- Will there be punishment for Inuyasha or will Sesshomaru somehow make Inuyasha watch him torture Kagome or what's going to happen?! Ahh the insanity this is driving me to trying to figure out! X_X lol


-DM
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow so much at once hehe! I love it-- every single bloody juicy bit of it please keep it up!! I wanan se mooore more violence more pain hehe!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That made me cry. And squirm! POOR INUYASHA!!! *sobs*

I thought this line was funny as hell for some reason: I would treat him as an equal in bed, at least. Maybe he could be a house hanyou. LMFAO!!! XDXDXDXD

Ahh. And I'm so totally upset by this chapter. I need to go sleep to cleanse myself from Inuyasha's pained arousal... yeah. XD


-DM
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I totally agree, but still a part of me feels for Inuyasha, because Sesshoumaru may want to dominate his little brother, he may think that Inuyasha belongs to him, but where was he all those years before. Inuyasha acts like an ass most of the time because of how he grew up, well... at least that how I see it, A defense mechanism. He knows nothing else. Sesshoumaru has no right to demean him more when we all know that Inuyasha already feels less than mosy vile of things. Okay...I think I have over dramatized the whole thing. lol sorry. But I usually get riled up when I read a great story and makes me so conflicted. I love this story...at the same time I want to stop because I love Inuyasha too much. lol

Love it. can't wait for morw
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the morning after should be fun. nice story.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY................... MAN THIS IS GOOD!! Usually I'm not a great fan of rape, but you made it hot so It's all good!
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I bless you 1 million times for using Sango and not Kagome-- I cant deal with her. This was wonderful. Sesshomaru is such a complex guy to write and you nailed him-- its hard to tell if he loves or hates Inuyasha. I await more mwhehe.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru sure has problems. lol. I can see Inuyasha with Sango, she is more sensible and can actually take care of herself. She is calm and collected and truly does accept Inuyasha for who he is. Love it
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW! That was... rough.. smutty.. violent. Whats not to love? Sex, violence, and pain!?!?!? Pleeease say there more pleeease...
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. More? I'm liking this- though I see you've kept up with the recent manga chapters, however there was a small mistake in this paragraph:

“Tetsusaiga?” Sesshomaru sounded intrigued, stepping closer to his younger brother and staring down into the narrowed gold eyes. “Why would I need that? I have Bakusaiga and Tokijin.”

Sesshomaru has Bakusaiga and Tenseiga, not Tokijin (that was destroyed sadly T_T). Iono if that matters or not but I thought I should point it out lol.

Great job so far, I'm totally feeling the emotions running torrent throughout this fic! I'm looking forward to the next update! ^^


-DM