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for You have brought this upon yourself

by Meggiez

person iris
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter three. Is inuyasha stupid or is he stupid?? why would he aggravate the asshole, tell him that you didn't have sex with anyone, jeesh! Im really hoping the ending doesn't involve Inuyasha's death XD
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what a delicious story. So beautifully written and descriptive. I absolutely love it, my mouth is watering thinking about the sheer dominance of your Sesshomaru and his firey, reluctant uke. Cudos on capturing their characters, you write them very well. I am on pins and needles waiting for a sequel.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An epilogue would be nice. I would love to know what decision they made and so on.
So please, continue!
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful picture. Very realistic looking and I love the purple-blue hues of the sky. I was a painter once, but when I learned how to play music and write, I lost my painting skills. Oh well, I suppose we can't have it all. *is eager about the epilogue*
person sadeness
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
I !LOVED! the story, it really is a pity it is over.
It would be nice to see their kids and how would they get them. (nasty smile ;-P)
I do hope to have the opportunity to read more from you soon.
kisses.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWWW! I think i'll cry... Never ever did i dream that sess would say somethin like that... I can't remember the chapter anymore... damn.. well any way.. gonna read the next one
person nchsmi
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell to the yeah!!!! Introduce the Inu offspring! Let Inu and Sess have a whole litter, to love, to cherish, and to drive them crazy!!!! I would love to see one of the kids ask them how they fell in love. So Inu and Sess would have to relay the whole story, leaving out some of the rough parts. Great story and B reading U!
person BatmanYaoi
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I really enjoyed this story, your a great wrier! I think it was perfect as is, leaving it off like that! But I wouldn't mind you writing another story!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T *sobs* You have no idea how much I want you to continue this!! Even just a chapter of "in the future" smut between the brothers! *SOB!*

I love how Sesshomaru got "disgustingly jealous" at the mention of Inuyasha and Sessh's own mom going at it! XD BWHAHA. That was great.

(more smut? phwee? *big eyes*)

GREAT JOB!! You rock as a writer! *I could never update as steadily as you! Your mind amazes me!* Yosh!


-DM
person mamarita
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this chapter- but I hope you do go on with the story... it seems to be at a turning point.