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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. i hope sess can do something to win kagome back ... and i hope that you will come back to the story and start updating again i wold love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL? The last chapter is rather sick. Rape of an adult or older teen is not that bad but the rape of a child as young as Rin's is in the story to me is way beyond phycotic. I was not expecting that type of violent and sick action to happen within the story as I read it. Where is a warning to point out hey rape and gore in this chapter?
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was debating with myself on wether to read this story or not and finally decided that I wanted to. I was shocked to find that it was really good. I love it! I hope you continue with it and update asap. I can't wait to read more.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes the story is real good and cannot wait for the next chapter of the story and plot is real good to. up date soon .
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its just a little confusing and rushed. And kagome needs to have a shorter, less "cliche" sort of demon type. That and she should either be miko or demon, because in theory, the two powers would kill the host. But I really like the plot line.
p.s. this is not a flame
~zen
p.s. this is not a flame
~zen
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um ah WOW is all i can say
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ummm......there is alot to say about this, but WOW sums it up pretty well