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I know that I just left you a review, but after reading one of your reviewers comments on the rape aspect of your story, I just had a little something that I would like to say. Personally, I felt like you warned the readers adequetly in the A/N before the beginning of the first chapter. Only an idiot could not discern that "Some would even say that it is somewhat non-consensual" was a warning of rape. Non-consensual is basically rape, so duh?? What was so hard to figure out there? I saw it right off. Personally, I did not find the piece offensive at all, and as for as all that NC mumbo-jumbo, well, Sess was acting of his own accord. Kagome was overcome by a potent lustful poison. She needed him, he fullfilled the need. They both got off, end of fucking story. What's to question? Was that rape? Hell, if that is the case then about 50 chic's from the bar the other night were raped when they got drunk as hell and took home a guy that they never before would have considered. Was the girl raped because she woke up with a loser? No. But, she was horney and he was happy to fulfill her basic need at the time. Did he stop to think, 'Gee, she's really drunk, should I ignore the fact that she is humping my leg?' HAHAHAHA! Like that would ever happen. Nope, home-boy said, "Let's go babe!" Personally, I think that tealeavesgreen was looking for a reason to bitch about something and found one in your fic. In this case, I go back to my favorite saying, "You can please some of the people some of the time, but not all of the people all of the time" Or, in this case more appropriately, "Opinions are like assholes, everbody has one." This story is far from a rape fic. I've written rape fics, both raunchy PWP and in-depth emotional turmoil and this fic just doesn't count in my opinion. Now, I've ranted my own piece of mind and I'm sure that you are tired of listening to me. lol!

From Rinseternalsoul to you... Thanks for the read!

Just give us another chapter!!! hahaha

Hmm, let me say this, you have NOT let us down yet. So my opinion is this.....write what ever comes to you. If it is lemonless, then so be it. It will just make the next chapter so much more sweet. The lemonade is fantastic and almost addictive. I think the little plot you have added has just made this whole experience oh so much more enjoyable. Thank you for writing it. It is just yummy!

wow!! this is actually really almost planned out smut!! i think.

this is so cool. i like the plot ness and the lemonsssss... they are soo cool and different.. they are really soo sesh like. u grasped many character of intreset.. but one.. inuyasha. and that cliffy was horrible-y placed.. in my opinion.. but it will leave me hanging around. hopefully not too total high school drama.. ya know.. "she's my bitch" fight. b/c there is already soo many of those..

is inu gonna kick her outta the pack?? does shippou play a bigger role in future chaps??

im soo curious. i will wait..

but not forever. noo worries. i'll wait.. muses are funny creatures.

I didn't expect any more for this story what a nice surprise.

omg!! please update soon! and please e-mail me once you do! i'd love to read more! my e-mail is thuytrinhhoang@aol.com

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Very very hot!

Yummy! That was oh so good. Until next time. Ja.

Very nice and entertaining. It's so hard for me to find fanfics that impress me. Usually people just ruin them with the cliches(ie: omg Kagome's in heat! rape her! omg Sesshoumaru's in heat? wtf? mating marks! lets be vampires! surprise! Kagome's secretly a dog demon and she's super powerful and totally a bad ass! no wait she's a pop star! OMFG INUYASHA YOU'RE A GIRL?!) I prefer stories that are set canon and not in say... modern America(Gag!)... and of course it's important to keep the characters in character, like, I hate it when they have Sesshoumaru suddenly showing up like- Kagome, I love you with mouth. omg I r stalking you cuz u r hawts. Then ofcourse there's the whole, "Tiffany Rainbowhair fell through the well where she instantly fell in love with Inuyasha and they were in love and had sprogs everywhere and I finally finished 3rd grade enrish..." I just skip them and pretend the person who wrote them is a pimple-faced squeely 12 year old... in any case I think what I'm trying to say is that you avoided all of these terrible fandom cleches and for that alone you are ok in my book. On top of that you did a convincing and very interesting story which strangely enough is one of the most original things I've come across even tho it's a cannon setting... seems cannon stories are the only original ones left... weird. Anyways thanks for a sexy and entertaining read. Looking forward to more. In the mean time I'll work on my own fic. Lateh~