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for A Mere Digression

by elle6778

schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm really glad you updated the story...hopefully you would continue to do so..its a wonderful piece & I was beginning to wonder if you would ever want to continue with it. I was so enamored by your other work " A Simple Legacy" -really Kudos to that....but on this piece I'm intrigued...thanks for sharing & updating...hopefully you'll continue to do so...more power...KUDOS!!!
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drools* I love your stories! I didn't know you had updated this one, so I just stumbled upon it on my way to fill my daily hentai urges... ehm, I mean... *blushes*
I think it's okay with one chapter with no lemon in it. Maybe if you write one chapter without lemons, you start missing them and update with another lemony chapter soon enough? One can always hope... ;)
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Its a great story and it has a lot of potental in it! Dont stop writing! I await your next chapter.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your lemony skills are wonderful!
person Keva
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I remember reading this when you first posted it way back when and was very disappointed when there was no new update on it. I am thrilled you have finally posted another chapter and can't wait for the next one. Very good story, I just love how Sesshou helps her with her problem. It was very... erotic? I think that's the word I wanted to use. Either way I liked it and liked it enough to post a review. (Which is something I rarely if ever do.) So keep up the good work and can't wait to see where this goes. Much love. Keva
person marcia
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is nothing wrong with throwing a bit of a plot into smut. I'll take whatever you give us.
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! That's is not where you were supposed to stop. And, there isn't another chapter to assuage my curiousity. Great story though. I love that they are mostly in character. I think each person has their own interpretation of the exact points about each characters true personality, but I can see your pov in this. Please continue. I am enjoying the lemons and the plot is there and it is intriguing.

Take care. And, for the sake of my curiousity, don't take too long. LOL
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story nice and hentai I love it....please up date please...
person L0VER
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
actually.. i wouldn't mind if there wasn't any lemon. im anticipating what will happen between inu and kagome . dont get me wrong, the lemons are OHWOWINTENSE. but you know, like i said, i wonder whats going to happen to inu. if you can somehow fit a lemon in that, it would be great but somehow i cant see if inu found out about them... then the thing you know, theres a lemon between her and sess. you know what i mean? nevertheless. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! : )
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've always enjoyed your stories, but 'A Mere Digression' has been a real treat! I've enjoyed the first four lemony chapters between Sesshomaru and Kagome with the hentai enthusiasm of Miroku. I am such a perv. lol! You're lemon writing style is very good and I believe the chapters could only be improved with the help of a good beta. Personally, I can overlook the minor errors for the well-written and exciting content. Maybe the next chapter, instead of starting out with Kagome's growing lust, you might begin with Sesshomaru finding himself inordinately distracted by his own growing desires. Instead of Sess stumbling across Kagome in a moment of need, he intentionally seeks her out to sate HIM. Possibly at the risk of discovery by her friends. It would also be pretty hot for him to finally let Kagome have her way with him. You know, tasting him as he has tasted her. Well, that is my naughty thoughts on the subject. Whatever you decide to write, I am sure that it will be enjoyable for the readers. ~Rin