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for Timeless Love

by kissthesky237

schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this chapter. i found it quite amusing, especially the appearance of kagome's temper. i love the attitude, i say 'let the sparks fly!'
person LadyCash
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, contact has been made!
Wondered when that would happen.
No worries, I'm sure you'll bring
our beloved dog-boy back in proper
timing. Wouldn't do otherwise!
person Patty530
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, hun. Reincarnation fic, bringing him back from hell, bring him in slowly or bring him in fast. It doesn't matter, just keep updating! : ) Love this tale.

Luv;
Patty




person oneswish
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the coolest inu kag fic i have ever read..
please keep writing. i'm so addicted to this.
person Rukhsana
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write beautiful descriptive passages. I've never seen chaps that were just one, big descriptive lemons before! Yes, we all can't get enough Inu/Kag lemons, I should know, I've written so many myself! But I hope you find time to create more tension and action in this story to make it less psychological and more meaty/heart racing. I am not a big fan of stories that have InuYasha reincarnated, but keep up the good work, hope to see more of this soon!
person madmiko
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. I was looking back through my reviews and I realized I really haven't praised your writing enough. (I spent too much time grumbling out my grievances against Inuyasha's stupidity. LOL!!) Your style is clear and fluid, and your descriptions are very evocative. The emotions are so strong, I almost have to close my eyes beczuse I feel like I'm intruding on them. You have presented Kagome's POV as well as I have ever seen. The situation in this chapter, (5), -- her sorrow at his going to Kikyou, followed by her anger at the other woman for hurting him just make Kagome the most incredible woman ever. She is the most sympathetic heroine in manga, and fanfiction, that I know of. And you do such an incredible job of portraying her. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this plays out. I just hope that somehow, by some miracle, Inuyasha becomes worthy of her. Lovely job!!
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As a fan, I don't buy the premise that he promised to end his life or go to Hell with Kikyo, and I think that's borne out in the manga as well... but this story is awesome. The lemon in the latest chapter was very realistic and intense. I like that there was angst without angsty dialog. Very nice.
person Patty530
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Sweetie. I really don't know what to say. (a first I assure you) That chapter was incredible. Intense. Exciting. I'm Sooo glad you said there would be a happy ending. Here's hoping your muse and all your plot bunnies stay happy and healthy. :)
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story. The lemons are HOT, but the emotional intensity is wonderful. You can actually feel the pain of these characters. Not everyong can do angst well without being melodramtic....but you do a great job with it. I definitely look forward to reading more soon.
person LadyCash
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
I have the feeling that bad things are a'comin.
Was this goodbye sex?
What has IY gone and done now? Or not gone and done?