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Love it! I am smacking my self right now for not reading this story sooner. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Chanda

What happen next?

Wonderful, simply a wonderful chapter. Thank you.

Luv, as always;

Patty

Ok, first let me just say that when I first read this on mm.org a while back, I left this huge review because I was so captured by this story. Then I woke up yesterday and it was the first thing I thought of. Where were you? Had I missed the update? So when I got home I couldnt for the life of me remember the title to this story...so I sat for, no shit, two hours sifting through every damn story I could for it. When I found it, I added you to my favorite author's list. Lemme just tell you, there is no one else on that list at mm.org. This story is just so damn good. Now, imagine my shock that you updated today.....I almost fell outa my chair. Whoot!! The chapter was amazing as usual. Thank you so much for the update.

Hey sweetie. No, this time it's not a kick in the butt, although.......

This is just a note wishing you a Happy Holidays.

Luv, as always;

Patty

interesting story... really like it so far... feel bad for kagome and what inuyasha decided... now that kagome met kin what will she do... and her meeting with sesshoumaru... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!

I can not even put into words how much I like this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the exceptional work!

Just a PS....I agree with Ladycash, I can't believe the Kagome didn't even consider Kin may be the reincarnation of Inuyasha. Heartbroken, her mind may have shied away from the idea. What's this going to do to her budding feelings for Kin? Make it easier or make it harder for her to except? And what will Kin do when He finds out that not only is he the reincarnation of a half demon, but that half demon was Kagome's first love and he chose to die and leave her to pay a debt he did not owe? I know,I'm full of questions. You just carry on the way you have been. It's an amazing story written by a wonderful writer.

Luv; as always,

Patty

The plot thickens. The question now is, How can Kagome face Kin now that she knows that he's the reincarnation of Inuyasha? All the heartache, the emotions, etc. etc.

Very nice twist to the story (although I had thought it was his reincarnation, I just didn't anticipate the Sesshomaru angle). I'll be looking forward to reading more of this work.

Sweet sassafras, I am completely and utterly ABSORBED in this fic! I haven't read a traditional InuKag pairing in years, but the way this is written...I'm simply compelled. First off, and I apologize because this is a tangent, I loved how you bemoaned your writer's block in one of your later chapter previews, only to begin the chapter with Kagome suffering the same affliction! That is way too clever! What a way to get around a frustrating part in your story...I chuckled in wonderment of how perfect a 'save' that was. So on with the actual fic:

Second...um...off: Your Lemons (that is InDEED, "L"emons with a capital "L")

Here's how I felt after reading those Lemons: AHWIEfhaiwheifuhawEHFIAWH123 HAIHVGAeg a!~~!!!!!!!!!! Translation: Hot & Bothered, Flustered, Anguished, Depressed, Overwhelmed, Spent. You may be only 18 and unkissed for the better part of a year (don't worry, my dear, I'm 28 and it happens to all of us) but you have - hands down - got the market cornered on the raw reality of soul-consuming sex. Screw that (hehe...I'm funny...), this is making love in the most carnal of ways, if that makes sense. It's cold and broken, hot and needy, but so painfully *bare* that you're riveted to the agony of the experience. In truth, a connection that deep is beyond words, but somehow you've managed to capture it. Best Lemons I've read in ages.

The rest of the story ain't half bad, either. ;) Oh who am I kidding? All of it is miraculous. The emotions leave me breathless, and never before have I felt such a tactile interpretation of Inuyasha and Kagome's bond. Kin is very well-thought out, showing the confidence Inuyasha would've naturally exhibited had he been born in more favorable conditions. Acceptance does wondrous things to a person, ne? I enjoy his solid charisma and charm.

Please keep this story up, as I'm sure you're garnering a lot of fans! It's amazing so far!