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for The Crimson Samurai

by szaugg

schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Inuyasha. :( To be forced into a bonding with someone he knew all his life as a tormentor to him. Someone who made him feel worthless most of the time. Even though Sesshoumaru is a cool character, he could at least have tried to calm Inuyasha down first before freaken taking him. I know that Sesshoumaru was trying to redeem himself and do right by Inuyasha, but I don't think FORCING Inuyasha is going to get him anywhere. It only shows Inuyasha how much Sesshoumaru doesn't respect him as a person. Which totally defeats the purpose of making amends. Sesshoumaru needs to suffer...at least a little. lol ;) What did Sesshoumaru expect...Inuyasha was on his own for a long time, he had to learn not to rely on anyone but himself. Sesshoumaru needs to understand that Inuyasha is different and trying to force him into a bond and convincing him that its for his own good is wrong and debasing Inuyasha. And I totally agree with Inuyasha...it was fucking...not "making love" Inuyasha may have enjoyed the outcome but it was forced upon him and he does not love Sesshoumaru...he doesn't even like him. (clears throat) and who's fault is that? lol Sesshoumaru has a long way to go still. I don't blame inuyasha for a second for not cooperating
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a realy great job as usly. Pleasue keep doing such a good job. Your storys are always so funny.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG so fucking good!!!!! Holy shit!!! I can't wait for more jeeze...I can't wait to see what you do with this. Do you have any idea if you are going to keep inuyasha in the future as is or are you going to send him back to where he belongs so that he can mate with sesshoumaru and have kids together instead of sesshou with some other bitch???? So many posibilities. Ohhhhh man so excited!!!! Keep 'em comin' luv and I'll be here readin'.
person Weirkat
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Since I love your 'The Last Pure Human' story, and the other stories you've written in that section, I decided to try your fan fiction. You are a wonderful writer and you've caught my attention again. Truly excellent, even without me knowing these characters. You really bring them to life in the written word.

Thanks a bunch!
person lara
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon!!!!!!!
person Viridiana
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO, WOW SESH ACTUALLY HAS CHILDREN! AND I LOVE THIS STORY SO PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! KEEP IT UP! =]]
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please let me know when you update this! This is great!
Poor Inuyasha. When will Sesshy figure out he hasn't been running around for 500 years and took the well-route instead?
I LOVE the Sesshoumaru duplicates! So /funny/!
What happened to their mother?
person mamarita
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story- but I wish you could update it finally. Two chapters is just such a tease. AGH!!! DLS
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great! inuyasha's reaction to sesshomaru's kids is so funny! will inuyasha get to see shippo anytime soon? what will happen when sesshomaru realizes that inuyasha traveled through time? please update this soon.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see an update soon...I don't care what...yaoi...het...

Just a little poke and prod and telling you you're wonderful and I love your stuff.

The more the better.