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April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww there should be another chapter for inuyashas second pregnancy and how sesshomaru got him pregnant again
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful and touching story! There are too few of these kind of stories out there for the brothers.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was superb enjoyed reading it very much, keep up the good work
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was very good. The only problem I saw is that you got some of the male anatomy wrong. Men do not have a G-spot. They do have a A-spot (the prostate). For more info, here is link that may help you write with more accuracy in the future. I really hope you write more in the future. :)
http://www.talksexwithsue.com/Aspot.html
http://www.talksexwithsue.com/Aspot.html
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on everyone, say it with me "AWWWWWWW"
Definality one of the most well-writen fan fictions I have EVER read. And that's saying A LOT. I've been reading fanfictions for about five years, and for about a year after I discovered fanfiction I did nothing but read them from the time I got home to the time I went to sleep, and that's IF I went to sleep. You are probably ranked...second on the list of good writing. Though your definality number one on AFF....at leats from what I've read...
Definality one of the most well-writen fan fictions I have EVER read. And that's saying A LOT. I've been reading fanfictions for about five years, and for about a year after I discovered fanfiction I did nothing but read them from the time I got home to the time I went to sleep, and that's IF I went to sleep. You are probably ranked...second on the list of good writing. Though your definality number one on AFF....at leats from what I've read...
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice but next time a little longer please....
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really nice, very pretty.
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh what made you decide to post on aff? I still love this story. how bout a sqeual and see what going on with the happy couple. eh.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice. I would love to hear more about the couple and their children. Maybe you could do a sequel? I loved it. 74982389795270805 stars! Your writing style is very fluid and emotionally driven. *gives you hug* ^_^
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definiely a fresh new original fic...the first for me where he's in dog form. Very Original! Loved it! Keep writng I wait for another one of your brilliant stories!