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for Devotion

by BlackberryPatch

person sampough
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how much I love you? In a completely safe, distant, internet way? I strayed from SxI for a while, but I returned, and you are my Gold Standard; everything else I read gets compared to yours. There's just something WARM about how you write them... all I need is your story, polar fleece pajamas, and some hot tea, and I'm good to go. Loveliness. Can smut be a balm to the soul?
person gen50
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this closeness that wraps them, the relationships that go deeper.
a saga, no less!

wonderful, wonderful
person misswarchan
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to know when you update please! I'm really liking these stories of yours~!

~Miss War-chan ^_^
person wolfluv
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cracking the wipp to the muse but in a goooood way!!!! AS ALL WAYS A REAL PLEASURE READING THESE STORYS!!!! I love the slow dance that these two are taking both emtioninaly and mentally and both trying to figure it out amoungst themselves and each other.

You make the reader both feel for them and feel it the story in it's self or at least for me you do. Once again an exquiset slow torture of a chapter one that I would be willing to read and re-read again!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!

and if you would not mind in your busy schedule sending me and email with your updates I would ever so appreciate it! wolfluv13@netzero.com THANK YOU AGAIN!!!
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When Inuyasha says to back off he means back off *giggle* this was great... nice and smutty and you write their intamcy so well it almost shameful!! ^_^ You have a real talent for action and drama and I am uber glad you created an email list for this!!

I must say it seems as if Sess was (at leaset at one point) rather free with himself *heh heh* I couldn't help but picture him wrapped up in a threesome with the pair they encountered in chapter 5. ENCORE and well done!
person Polka dot
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice, they're a hot pair!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"He said... unkind things about... you." His eyes narrowed and his lip curled in disgust as he eyed the blood on his hands. " I tore out his heart, and then I broke his neck."

Way to go Sess!! (That line was beyond superb!!) I was pleased to see that there was more to the Inglorious, Fraternal, etc Arc. I hope to see this continue for quite a few chapters for it is worthy of reading and constant rereading (as I have done) Kudos and if you have an email list going out when you update please add me to it Onyxlight06@yahoo.com
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I must say Ros with Jaken was shocking to say the least (gives the reader weird imagery) but hey the little green guy needs love too so Kudos! It was a cute twist and I hope it pops up again. ^_^
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I've read the whole series now and it was most excellent !
person Demitria
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the confusion on both sides when they confess feelings for each other; Sesshomaru is so adorably cute sometimes... And I love the possessiveness as always! ^^ I hope that Doror stays dead! Grrr! And more inucest comes our way! Yay!