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by BlackberryPatch

person Enigma
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading your stories. I prefer reading them complete but the black background on your website is very harsh on my eyes, the colors are very pretty. So could you keep me on chapter updates instead?

That nutcase that stole Inuyasha, was some character. He started out with goal for safe heaven for 1/2 demons. I think it ran him nutty over time. I think Inu & Sessy made him reevaluated alot of his thinking.
Quite the adventure. The mind attack on Sessy WOW! Sessy feelings for Inu were really tested, almost had Sessy there. I like how you weaved Rin in there. Rin saved by 2 sexy naked Inu's, still laughing how you handled that one.
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Kunya and Badr, sad lives. I think Az needs a reality check...he's been too long in the sun. Damn cliffies! Our Inu boys are so close...
person Winter 235
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Only on the edge of my proverbial seat here! You're killing me with the cliff hangers.
person SP777
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #14...

Oooo...now we're getting somewhere!

You know it would be something if Afzal [what does the name mean] DARE
to claim Inuyasha as his own, Sesshomaru would be PISSED!
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, this 'vacation' of theirs... worse ever...
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, Sesshy was taken down too easily... My opnion, anyway - I am sure u will rectify. I cant believe Inu cant sense Sesshy. Good job
person Snowfall
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a bastard! This is so weird. Sesshoumaru needs his cousin's magic! This is so awful. *whines* Now I'll be wringing my hands until the next chapter.
person SP777
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

Nice filler, curious about the new guy...and I can't wait
for the explosion Inuyasha will have with this new revelation!

...and how come no one has put Kunya out of his misery???
person SP777
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoops I meant #13, got ahead of myself. Plus I'm plain tired!
person vampress
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was ok I guess. But, it has been so long since the last update I really don't remember what exactly the story is about. If you are waiting for reveiws to update, not everyone wants the hassel even for a good story or every chapter. Writers lives are busy so is the readers who like to read a good story without waiting forever for it to be finished. I guess I'll wait til the story is finished to go back & maybe re-read it, maybe.