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for The falling Rain

by bluedragonkai

person Jadziane
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice start. Look forward to next chapters
person Kawaii_neko
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you've got some spelling mistakes

Naraku Not Nuraku

Good so far, just wondering what happens next.

person me1
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
5 chapters in one day!!!!! You and this story rock!!!!!!
person raven28
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it can't what for more
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it but you have a few spelling mistakes. the name is Sota or Souta not shota