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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love where this story is going. You said you needed a Beta, well, I've currently got writers block and a lot of time on my hands. I would love to Beta for you, if you are truely serious. My email is kagenoshiseisai@aol.com. Just send me what you have and I will correct any spelling errors or grammar mistakes, okay? Hope to hear from you.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really love how this story is turning out ^_^
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying your story and look forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!!! Please up-date again soon!!! I have to know what happens next!!! I love that they are mated now!!! Sooo cute together!!!!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! I love it!! More Please!!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your plot is quite good. This is an excellent story, just work on your vcabulary a bit and watching out for repitition. I think that in one of your earlier chapters, you meant that the lightning was deafening not defining, which means the act of telling the definition of a word or something similar, and does not mean having the capability of causing a person to go deaf from the loud noise, which is what deafening means. Keep up the good work, and watch out for typos.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more the story is real good and i love it and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if kagom e and sesshumara get long real good. good luck and up date soon. love .
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man i love u!!!! you update like a mad women and THE CHAPTERS ARE FUCKIN AWSOME!!!! let do it again!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say that the plot for this story is a good one. However you have a few spelling errors, like Naraku's name. I like the story so far but you may need a beta. Alot of people had pet peeves about grammer when reading a fic and will give horrible reviews. So try to find a beta there are wonderful ones out there. I cant wait to read the next chapters.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great two chapters. Will Sesshoumaru get back to the past? keep the updates coming.....:)