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My goodness I absoultly love your story. I can't wait til the next chapter comes out. The way you write I can see all of the story happening. Keep up the awesome work.

this story is amazing!! aww i cant wait to see what will happen between kagome and inuyasha.. but what about shun... personally i dont like him all too well and its plain to see that they dont love each other that much... but stil...well anyways i love your story cant wait for an update!!!
xo
tk

Oooohhh, very yumsicle! Kagome definitely seems like she's just tired of giving Shun the benefit of the doubt, and I'm with her on that. Shun is sweet but way too messed up, and I like that you made Inuyasha able to draw out all of her fire and spirit. Overall I like it, especially like that you put up longer chapters (like me ^_^).

Gaia

I am totally sucked into this story. I've gotten out of the traditional I/K pairings for awhile, but I'm crazy mad excited I stumbled upon this fabulously tension-ridden debaucle-in-progress! I must admit, for some strange, masochistic reason Kouga is my favorite character in this fic, probably because he's a carbon copy of some guys friends of mine from college. And Inuyasha...well, you've outdone yourself with the hotness factor, there! His interactions with Kagome are at once hilarious, sweet, passionate and endearing. I'm pretty much smitten, and can't wait to read more!

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i love it. i can't wait for the next chapter! =] ...

Sorry I don't usually write reviews, but I wanted to let you know I have been enjoying this story. I actually nominated it as one of the best AU stories out this quarter at the IYFG, but they said it needs to have its punctuation fixed up before it can be voted on. (Seems pretty darn picky to me, but those are their rules. In particular, they said that the main problem was when a character speaks, you end what they say with a period, instead of a comma, and then end the sentence with a period, too.) So, if you want to try to sharpen it up enough for me to appeal their DQ and try to get it put back on the list before the seconding period, just let me know. I'll even be happy to help you, if I can, but it would probably need to be done in about a week. If that seems like too much to do in such a short time, I'll still be happy to help you spruce it up so I can nominate it again for the NEXT quarter. I really like it. It's a great change of pace from so many of the other stories where InuYasha is the one with an extra woman on the side. It's good to see him have to sweat it out for once over Kagome having another guy. It's light-hearted and fun to read, too. Whatever you decide, I'll keep reading and enjoying.

One of the best stories Ihave read ina while. I pray tha you are going to finish this. It is just to good to leave incomplete. And finally the tension is shown between InuYasha and Kagome. Though Shun is a real sore loser. And really out of place.
Because its like Hiten and Kouga are more close and Miroku and Inuyasha are closer than the rest yet their still friends . Shun just doesnt really fit into the equation.
Quetion, do you have this story in another site because I could have sworn I read something like this before. If you dont maybe you should check if someones copying your work.
Well I work early tomorrow. Ciao
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Yay! I was so happy to see a new chappy up! In spite of the angst inherent in their situation, this is still one of the most "fun" Inu/Kag fics I've read in a long time. So, I'm really enjoying every minute of it! And I see you noted my greatest fault -- long, rambling reviews. LOL!! Well, let me get right to it. THIS was a chapter designed to delight all of us secret Sesshoumaru fangirls. (Secret, because we can't let Inu know that!) You absolutely slew me with his thoughts that he was going to die young and sexy with Inu's driving. And I loved the cards Inu had printed up to hand out to his passengers. I also like the way you keep mentioning the minor charcters, and including them in the fun. (Totosai, Myouga, and soon-to-come Kaede.) I also loved Sess' line about them having to put up with 3 dogs in the house -- 2 four-legged canines, and 1 two-legged baka. Hilarious!! And he got to be all-seeing and all-knowing about Inu's feelings for Kagome. I was very interested that he pointed out to Inu that she was too much for Shun. So devious of him to invite her to lunch, and then not go. LOL!! Well, you certainly shocked me with Kagome's little revelation about Kiyuta forcing himself on her in University! I guess I had assumed that since she and Shun weren't sexually active, that she was still a virgin. This throws her actions with Inu in yet another light, -- if she was attracted enough to him to go ahead and "get lost in the moment", even if it WAS the nasty old alcohol's fault, (HA!), and yet hadn't made that step with her own fiancee, well, ... I have to wonder about her outlook on that. That tends to make it seem even more 'singular' an event, since she has probably been quite hesitant about relations like that, after her horrible experience. How many of her friends know about that, I wonder? Wait. Didn't Sango say something about her still being a virgin? I may have to go back and check that out during their little girl-talk. If that's the case, then I guess Sango doesn't know what happened to her, does she? Oh, this is very, VERY interesting!! Especially since she just told Inu the story. I guess subconsciously, she feels like she can trust him on a very deep, private level. I wonder if she will think about that later? Does Shun know? I'm betting not. And the fact that Inu may be coming to know her better than the others says a lot about their connection. Hmmm. Now I'm envisioning a scene where the guys are all together, and Inu asks Shun why he hasn't kicked Kiyuta's ass for what he did, and Shun goes "Huh?" And the guys suddenly wonder just how well Inu knows Kagome. Oh! Question!!! (And you don't have to answer, but I HAVE to ask. ^_^ ) Will it ever come out to the guys that Kagome was the one Inu kissed when they sent him after the envelope? I can just see him thanking them for kidnapping his furniture at the end of all of this. ^_^ Well, I suppose I should end this before the word count goes bust. LOL! I will be looking forward to more!! (And I didn't even talk about how much I liked her partners' relationship with her. LOL!)

Wow, I really like the story! Update soon, please! =D