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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:: bully bully:: Write!
Okay.. I did it... Now hurry up! :)
Thanks for the update. This is one of two fics im willing to read right now.
Keep up the good work.
~L
Okay.. I did it... Now hurry up! :)
Thanks for the update. This is one of two fics im willing to read right now.
Keep up the good work.
~L
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it plz update and keep the good stuff a rolling!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is awesome. From one fan of Jane Austen to another I must say that I appreciate how this is going and how you have been able to weave 'Pride and Prejudice' into a modern story with some clever ideas. I like the way they first met and the angst you have set. I also love how you have Rin be the equivalent to Mr. Darcy's younger sister. Nice touch! Now if you are going to continue the 'Pride and Prejudice' storyline, I am expecting that Shun will do something to make Kagome almost unmarriageable. Back when Jane Austen wrote her book it was something as simple as having Elizabeth's sister fool around out of wedlock. But with today's crowd I fear that scene will be much darker. And I'm pulling for Inuyasha to get Kagome out of the mishap just as Mr. Darcy saved Elizabeth.
OK bravo. This English Lit. major is impressed. Please keep on posting! I'm awaiting your next chapter!
OK bravo. This English Lit. major is impressed. Please keep on posting! I'm awaiting your next chapter!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally realization. I have such a bad feeling that Shin is going to go all phyco and shit on Kagome and/or Inuyasha though.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! PEASE!!! *gives puppy eyes*
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man this story is FREAKIN' AWSOME! You gotta update ASAP! Please?!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a fabulous chapter to come back with. The tension and the passion were great. You kept sliding back and forth between present and past tense in a lot of sentences, though, and some of the words you used didn't seem to fit or flow well with action. But, for a first lemon, you did a good job. ^_^ And since you said you kept changing it a lot, that definitely explains how some of the tenses could get mixed. I've done that myself when I've gone back and changed things.
Both Inu and Kag were having a lot of second thoughts there for a while, and I was really surprised when he went ahead and started things up again after he had left her in the kitchen. When he felt the ring on her finger, ... that was heavy stuff. And I'll be expecting him to do a whole heck of a lot more thinking about how she had never been with anyone before. If he had known that, I don't think he would have gone so far. But, he did, and he has to know that means something more to her than "just a fuck." So, now I'm wondering what his attitude is going to be? I thought he had already decided he wanted her, Shun or not. Now that they've been so intimate together, I think his thoughts about her are going to be possessive.
As for Kagome, well, she had already decided to break things off with Shun, but I'm sure she will feel a bit guilty about being with Inu before she actually gave the guy his ring back. So, who is going to back her up and encourage her to follow her heart? Sango? Or will Sesshoumaru maybe have a few words of advice for her? (Or just more for Inu? LOL!!)
I'm still wondering what all of the guys are going to think/say about this turn of events. I'd love to overhear some conversations, even before they find out that Inu and Kag ...
And finally, we have Shun, who is losing it. LOL!! He has some kind of plan to keep hold of Kagome. I can't wait to find out WHAT.
It was so nice to get to read a new chapter of this! I'll look forward to more!
Both Inu and Kag were having a lot of second thoughts there for a while, and I was really surprised when he went ahead and started things up again after he had left her in the kitchen. When he felt the ring on her finger, ... that was heavy stuff. And I'll be expecting him to do a whole heck of a lot more thinking about how she had never been with anyone before. If he had known that, I don't think he would have gone so far. But, he did, and he has to know that means something more to her than "just a fuck." So, now I'm wondering what his attitude is going to be? I thought he had already decided he wanted her, Shun or not. Now that they've been so intimate together, I think his thoughts about her are going to be possessive.
As for Kagome, well, she had already decided to break things off with Shun, but I'm sure she will feel a bit guilty about being with Inu before she actually gave the guy his ring back. So, who is going to back her up and encourage her to follow her heart? Sango? Or will Sesshoumaru maybe have a few words of advice for her? (Or just more for Inu? LOL!!)
I'm still wondering what all of the guys are going to think/say about this turn of events. I'd love to overhear some conversations, even before they find out that Inu and Kag ...
And finally, we have Shun, who is losing it. LOL!! He has some kind of plan to keep hold of Kagome. I can't wait to find out WHAT.
It was so nice to get to read a new chapter of this! I'll look forward to more!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this tory is just wow.
I love it!
You must carrying on! I mean you just
gotta!
Update soon, and happy new years!
^_^
I love it!
You must carrying on! I mean you just
gotta!
Update soon, and happy new years!
^_^
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the October 2007 term!
Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month.
http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-InuKag-Romance-Fic-3rd.jpg
After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php
The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.
Our official website can be found here -
http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/
And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
~ The Daimyo
Owner of the Feudal Association
Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month.
http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/October2007/Best-InuKag-Romance-Fic-3rd.jpg
After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Oct2007/Awards.php
The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year.
Our official website can be found here -
http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/
And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here -
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
~ The Daimyo
Owner of the Feudal Association
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how they met each other!
I like it so far keep updating
^_^ !!
I like it so far keep updating
^_^ !!