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Itz a great story! Plz plz update soon!

As always, your story is becoming more interesting. I love the way you portray Inu Yasha. I hate it when they describe him as being ingnorant and dense, when even in the anime he has his deep moments. As for Shun, you're right. I think that he's just the way he is because of the kind of life he's been living.
I'm writing a story myself that has similar characters that reviewers have told me they hate. But I guess the writer is the only one that knows what is in the depths of their soul.
So, anyways, keep up the awesome writing!

This story is truly breathtaking! I have enjoyed every aspect of the characters, every word, every twist and turn. You have kept me in suspense from the moment Inuyasha met Kagome to the very last word. Not to mention the emotions that run through every chapter from laughter to sadness to pure anger. You have made it is to hate Shun and Shizu. With their coniving and demeaning personalities, their selfishness and self loathing is to be admired as well as hated, because everyone has some self loathing qualities tough many of us choose not to dwell on them. However, it seems Shun is determined to make everyone as miserable as he is and it seemed to work until that fateful night when our favorite heroine met the man of her dreams even though she has not realized yet, at least no to herself. I can't wait to see what transformations Shun has underwent and how it will affect Kagome. Please update soon!

Yayyy! You wrote the phone conversation!!
By now we alllll know that Shun & Shizuru are gonna burn in hell with their waton love affair.
But I lovvveeee your story its soooo funny and witty and believable.
Write more please!!!!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei

can't wait to see what happens next :d it's just... wonderful :d keep it up :)

What a bad day for Kagome ,huh? Love this chapter.If I was Kagome I would have went all the way to London JUST to murder both of those motherfuckers ,mostly Shun the little slut of a man(but I guess that what a first love could do to a person),I wish you would have wrote the phone call I would have loved to read it.And I love how you wrote how Inuyasha never remembers Hojo's name just because he doesn't like him.Love your story!
Love Always^
^Dei Dei

Nice to see a new chapter up for this story. I liked the way you backed up and showed us Kagome's wanderings/musings before Inuyasha caught up with her at her apartment. That was really nicely done. And I enjoyed Hiten's freaking out over the pink truck while the others were reacting to what Ayame had said. Too funny! It just HAD to be Kikyou's. LOL!! I do so love the role you had for her in this.

So, Shun showed his true colors and threw his cheating in Kagome's face when she broke things off, huh? I have a feeling he is going to totally lose it when he gets back and sees that she and Inuyasha are together. I still feel a tiny bit sorry for him, because it seems like he's always been just on the edges of the group and now he's going to lose them all, but he's really despicable for continually running to Shizuru the way he has.

The end part with Inuyasha and Totosai racing was funny. Especially poor, sweet Hojo. Looking forward to more!

fantastic! I couldn't stop reading!! Honestly! er... and now I have to go do all that homework I put off by NOT putting this down ^^;; Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

i love it

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Please keep posting! I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome find some happiness together. But if I don't miss my guess, you have some pretty heart wrenching angst coming up. Poor Kagome! Be merciful! :-)