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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I like the manner in which you describe details, settings and scenery. Your characterization of Sesshoumaru is also very good. If in that situation, I believe he would behave that way.
I am a little confused about Chapter 10's role in your story; however, I am sure it will become clear as the story progresses.
I hope you are able to update soon. I am interested to see what happens next. (I also hope this review takes this time. You have no idea how many reviews I have tried to leave, only to find out they didn't take---very weird.)
I am a little confused about Chapter 10's role in your story; however, I am sure it will become clear as the story progresses.
I hope you are able to update soon. I am interested to see what happens next. (I also hope this review takes this time. You have no idea how many reviews I have tried to leave, only to find out they didn't take---very weird.)
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story, but this last chapter was so powerful. Beautifully written, almost like poetry, and filled with heartbreaking pain.
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you've broken my heart at least 3 times so far in this story. you've made me laugh and cry. your writing is smooth, powerful, subtle. i've shortcutted this story to my desktop so i won't forget to check for new chapters. and i WILL nag for those chapters because i want to see how you finish this beautiful story.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Inuyasha and Kagome REALLY need to work on their communication skills. They love each other so much that they can devastate each other easily. But, both are too darned stubborn to have an honest conversation?! How frustratingly stupid....and endearing. They are so sweet but so DUMB! LOL. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a moving and intriguing story
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful, in words tone and in its true essence of canon. Each chapter gets more revealing as we are allowed into the inner workings of the minds of RT's characters. SHE would be proud of the care and warmth you embue within each. I happen, as you know,to be blissfully in love with Sesshoumaru...woooooooooooof! Even then, the burgeoning affections between Kagome and Inuyasha are palpable and cannot wait to see it come to its timely fruition...GIVEN TIME, and the beauty, devotion and yes loved that is hinted at through Rin the young woman as she perceives her lord and Master of the Western Lands is delicious. Angst, Love and depth I find when I read this work. Brava!