rate_review Reviews

wonderfully funny and eloquently written. will there be more?

thank you,
ginny

This has wonderful potential, both for the comedy value and the smut possibilities. Good work getting the fic back on its feet. One thing though. You don't need the Japanese scattered throughout. It's a bit confusing because it makes it seem as if they were speaking English with just a few Japanese words used, ne? Certain words, like taiyoukai or youki work since they are difficult to translate while keeping their meaning, but Inuyasha could just say "Shut up" instead of Urusai. Funny story.