rate_review Reviews

You said you wanted my honest opinion, no? Well, you're getting it anyway. The story itself..the plot, and such..was all right. I can see how the plot would flow. Yet..you may be able to get the paragraphs and ideas to flow if you stop trying to just fill the area. Sometimes, love, when you put little..you put a lot. For instance..when the dominant was un-dressing the submissive you could have done it in a less revealing manner that expressed a poetic/animalistic sense to give that..certain delicous taste before what came next. Understand? You have to tease your reader's to a point of them being on the edge of their seat and whining for him to just..drive his pulsating cock deep inside of her, hot, tight waiting inner walls. Give in to the desire, and you'll claim the cause. I did enjoy it, though. Just some honest tips.

Very well written.

I'm impressed.

This must be the first story I've read with such a pairing, but you managed to capture their personalities with one another perfectly.

I'm interested in reading more of your work~

--NaNa

I used to not care the pairing until I read a few good fics. Now I find the pairing intriguing, and it was very well written and descriptive for a pwp. And wow that was sum hot sex right thurrr. I like the whole demon slayer with a demon lord thing. Thanks for the awesome read!

... Wow. I love it! Keep up the great work, seriously! =^.^= I enjoyed reading this story, so, a great favourite from me! You should write more to this pairing. <3

Very smexeh. ^-^ Still, Sango is ew.
I think shes alittle annoying...never liked her.
Anyway, very nice, I didn't know he liked getting head..<<;;;
Just hard to picture that.
Then again, it's hard to picture him doing anything sexual....without breaking the girls hips or something.
Demon smex..hehe.
ANYWAY! Good job.
^-^

For the most part, it was very well executed. You actually didn't make me vomit with this pairing. It could almost make sense. And that's saying a lot for me.

About the only things I could say that need work are a better understanding of the female anatomy [ because 11 inches by three inches doesn't just go in without some pain there, chief ], and the layout of your paragraphs was a bit off. Think about getting a beta, they're good for helping with things like that.

Altogether... bravo.

Brillant, damn brillant. I honestly hope u write more whether it be Sango and Sesshopmaru or Sango and Inuyasha..Well as long as the female is Sango, I'll read and review..!!!

I haven't come across too many Sango/Sesshoumaru fics out there that I really liked but this is up there as one of them. The way it's put together actually had me a little flushed at the end. And I've been reading lemon fics for years. lol. anyway I really hope you continue writing; I'd love to read more. ^_~