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by LadyShinomori

person madmiko
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, great horny toads! THAT was some hot smut!! I think that's the most detailed, realistic threesome I've ever read. And you still managed to throw in some interesting story elements -- where did you find time for that?!!? LOL!! I liked the ending of the quest, her being with Inu the one time, and her dating Hojo a bit sounds very plausible. But for her to be dating Kurama's stepbrother now was a great twist! Brilliant! And Yusuke's thoughts about him and Keiko were really interesting. After THAT, I don't think Kurama and Yusuke will want to give her up. But, I can't wait to see how Hiei comes into the picture. (You know me -- that's the pairing I live for! LOL!!) I'm sorry you had a bad day, but I love the way you chose to get rid of the stress. I can't wait to see more of this!!
person Dawn
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope to read more.
person Michael22
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and hot and can/t wait to read more .