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for Strength in the Weak

by Shina

person snowbird
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a good writing talent. It's just too bad that you can't seem to get beyond the first chapter on any of your stories that are not oneshots. You tease the reader with the promise of a good story and then abandon the story and the reader. I just hope that nothing bad happened to take you away from your writing. Please, could you at least write an A/N to let us know what's going on?
person JenLazar
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so this is a storyline not many attempt to write, just because the fanbase normally wants all love and happy sex for this couple. I'm impressed with it. It is a hard topic to tread upon so I'd include that in your summary to help ward off flames. I hope you continue it because it has picted my interest. Jen
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait until this is updated!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG please update soon, this seems so good!!!!!!!! I am always busy working, is it possible for you to email me if you update, if not that is okay. But please do update soon, I want to read what happens next!!!!!
person Noacat
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good that you gave the content warning (I'm speaking specifically about rape). However, you might also want to add it into the description, just as a courtesy.
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously dark.

There are some grammar, spelling and punctuation errors, but overall they weren't too distracting. This is the type of story that many people simply cannot write (assuming that this story is going to be as brutal as I think it is). I'm interested to see how it develops.

CG
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!