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for It Must Be Destiny

by theamberdragonfly

schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, for the third story, I hope we will see some more of Amber and Inusouta, besides Izayoi. Especially Inusouta mastering his new weapons. Maybe he will form a pack with his Sister and Amber, so they will fight together.

But it is your story in the end. We can only make suggestions.

Keep up your work.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great end to the story, it really has been awesome for both your stories and I'm really looking forward to your future stories. In the next one will there still be bits of the Amber/Inusouta story? Whatever the story winds up beings, I have a feeling it'll still be awesome :)

As for still being undecided on the title, if you want to continue the same style of title while still following the guidelines for the story you wanted, how about, "What Dreams May Come"

Hope you found my opinion constructive and the best of luck to you on your future stories
The Keeper
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GRRR.

Remember me to throw a Shinku Ha Do Ken at those parents of Kohaku. Very good turn point.
Well, if they know what is good for them, they remain still. But I have a feeling that her parents think that you can get anything for money. Well, but they will learn a lesson or two I hope.

Keep up the very good work.

Will this story be as long as fate? Or will it be even longer?.
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh more!! i love this story!!!! i cant wait to see inu-kitsune babies!!!! they'll be soooo cute!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really glad you finally updated, it really is an immerisive story and I'm looking forward to its conclusion
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude i thought you stopped writing this story!!! i was shoked to see it again!!!! i love it please keep going!! (and not like a month apart XD)
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. Long time no see ^-
Hehe.

I like the new chapters very much. But please update a little sooner the next time. Almost gave up hope that it would continue.

Please keep up the good work.
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really hope some day you'll continue your story. It was quite well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly, both this and the last one.
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're story is really good. Amber is a descendent of Shippou, isn't she? Please update soon. I check in like every other day to see if you've made any additions to the story. Haha.
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* good so far. can't wait for an update!!!