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for It Must Be Destiny

by theamberdragonfly

person Teresa
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
._. I was wondering when Shippo was going to appear. I had forgot about him until i heard the green eyes part and literally my mouth dropped and i took a double take on that paragraph. This is the first Fanfic's that I've read in a long time that made my jaw drop :) good job!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent story. I once again find myself reading till the end. Your story is so well thought out and descriptive. I was in tears when Kagome read the letter to Inu.

I would love to have you write in both this story and the first follow-ups that didn't occur so far in the future, though. It would be nice to have some story to follow up on why Kagome was in the bathroom crying in the first one and give some more on when the youngest was born and when they decided to make modern-day their home.

In this one I would love to see you continue to let us know who is with pup Kagome or Amber or and even better senerio both of them.
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was so fucking funny that it's a wonder I couldn't even read it, truely great, though the lemon could use some impruvements. Ja ne and onto the next installment just hope I can stop laughing long enough to read it.
person Sieg
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even better then the first one I must say. Your a very talented writer and you should keep writing. So far these two stories are the best I have read and I have read many.

~~Sieg
person Amysama
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally found my way back to this story.
My reading is kind of sporadic. Oh well.

I really enjoyed this story, and the first.
I'm waiting rather impatiently for the next installment. If things go well with Inusouta and Amber they will need a spray bottle full of water. "No, No, bad pup/kit."

For the next installment I was thinking some thing like "Simply Serendipity" if that helps at all..

Gambette!
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well since the last 2 titles have Been fate and destiny how about "it was written in the stars" for the next one
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i love this story.... i got a title for you too incase you like it.... Defying Daddy.. kinda catchy.... considering daddies baby will be arguing a lot to go hunt shards lol
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I've been reading this story for 4 hours and just got to the latest chapter. Excellent character development, everyone has flaws, no Mary-Sues, and happily-ever-after didn't come without fights and asylums. Overall, I am deeply impressed and hope that you continue with the other girls finding their mates.

Gaia
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. And when I got to the end of It Must Be Destiny and read that you'd be writting a third, I was really excited!!! I instantly tried to think of titles to help you out (I'm weird like that). What came to mind was Karma Can Be a Bitch Sometimes (to go with the whole "Destiny" and "Fate" theme). But anyway, I hope you luck in the next story, and I'll be sure to keep my eyes open for it!
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Good ending.

I'm eager to read Izayois story next.

You are a very good author. Thank you so much for two very brilliant storys.