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for Not His Chattel

by lexxsly

schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps one of the best stories on this site; it's very unfortunate it remains incomplete. A portrayal of the characters so nuanced and subtle is unfortunately rare. I'm trying to do similar things with my writings.
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's very good, and i like that inuyasha can't get his hands off kagome - just how it's supposes to be :P, well as long as kagome likes it, of course...
please don't make this into some sort of teenage pregnancy story, where kag gets pregnant and then the rest of the story consists of baby-talk ;)
love it, and can't wait for more!!!
person Suniko
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you added a new chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work!

Suniko
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, from idea to execution. It's a different take on the word 'mature' since it takes a look at the consequences and repercussions of the actions of our fave characters. I like where it's going and especially now that Mom's taking an interest.
person Suniko
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Does her mom knows about them? Whats going to happen to them anyway? Please update soon! I can't wait to read it.