errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy you included Inuyasha in this chapter :) At the same time, I was also sad that this could possibly be the end. don't stop now. It's just getting to the good part
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, you have to continue this. That is a mean way to leave it, it would make a sad a beautiful ending to a story, but it not right with how good this story is going. you should have Youko think it over for 500yrs and then find Kagome again in time to save her life...make him repair her broken heart...gotta do that, with your writting skills it would be so beautiful to read
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It wouldn´t be right to end it here. The end was too abrupt.
This story sounds more like an epitome than an actual story if you really end it here. The reader doesn´t get to know anything.
While the chapters you already wrote are beautifully written and a really interesting BEGINNING of a story the end seems overhasty to me.
PLEASE do continue the story/write a sequel. You just can´t leave your readers in the lurch.
This sounds much too promising to let it end here!
This story sounds more like an epitome than an actual story if you really end it here. The reader doesn´t get to know anything.
While the chapters you already wrote are beautifully written and a really interesting BEGINNING of a story the end seems overhasty to me.
PLEASE do continue the story/write a sequel. You just can´t leave your readers in the lurch.
This sounds much too promising to let it end here!
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, firstly, thank god you updated! I've been waiting since forever :) Secondly...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! There are too many loose ends. It would be so horrible to not have a proper ending. Please consider it.
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DON'T YOU DARE END IT THERE!! I'LL HAVE TO BITE YOUR HEAD OFF! you got to have the story go further and into kagome's time! she should have some scares and kurama has to make up with her!!!! and rebuild her soul and heart back up! PLZ PLZ DON'T END IT THERE!! YOU LEFT TO MUCH OPEN!!
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. I swear i almost cried at the end. Could you make a sequel if you don't continue on the first story? It would be cool if Kagome and Youko met up and she turned him down for hiei or Koenma. That would be awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule
February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It would be terribly unfair to end your story now. Mostly because it would make the title and summary of your story very misleading. This story is called MENDING a broken heart, not how our favorite fox kills our favorite miko. And the summary does indicate that he will try and make it up to her in the future. As a reader who's been waiting a long time for an update, this was a... dissapointing chapter. You are a good writer, so please continue this story.
schedule
February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE please continue with the story! It would be terribly cruel of you to end it here!
MORE PLEASE!!!
Until we meet again.
MORE PLEASE!!!
Until we meet again.
schedule
January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I really look forward to finding out why Youko dumped Kagome. Please update soon!