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for Mending a broken heart

by twilight313

schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is Yomi still in the picture?
person MeLaiya
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im loving this but I just have one suggestion. MAKE YOUKO SUFFER!!!! ...Oh and keep up the good work and update soon.
person carna
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYA please update as soon as posibble
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH! I like it. At first I thoght the begining was a bit over used in stories now but I like the twist you added. I can't wait for an update! I will be looking for one.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the story I hope to read more soon very soon it was great
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so sad, please update soon
person rage
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man that was ssssssssoooooooooo gggggggggooooooooooodddddddd!!!!! I hope you update real soon, I can't wait to know what happens next.
person KawaiiKekeChan
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going great! ^^ I love the way the plot is developing, and your story is more original than the usual Kagom betrayals! I hope you continue! Good luck~
person inulover
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey you have to continue you left to many unanswered questions that you even know of. I thought he was going to wait for her and in 500 hundred years Kurma finds her and he tries to fix his mistakes from the past. Come on you know you can and want to continue 3 chapters is way to short and incomplete so please continue.
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow have to wait months to get a horrible ending. this is sad.