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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue !! I LOVE IT SO FAR !!!!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god please continue!!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. You did a real good jog so be proud of yourself!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe I meant job..... don't you hate it when you type too fast and hit the wrong key?
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! This was the first chance I got to read your story and I must say that I love the idea that you have come up with. I thought that this was their first encounter but that is not the case. Very good you had me going there for a while.
You wanted suggestions on what could come next. Hmm, since the mating is being kept from Inuyasha then you can play it off that way. They can continue to hunt Naraku. I have no idea how long you want to make this story but you can have Inuyasha start gett suspicious of Sesshoumaru with Kagome. There could be a fight and Sesshoumaru saves Kagome where Inuyasha couldn't.
Then in the middle of the fight have him run off to Kikyou and then pick up on the fight once he comes back. Kagome could get really mad at him for complaining that Sesshoumaru had saved her where he had failed to do so. Then she could bring up the fact that he left her hurt to go after Kikyou.
This is just a suggestion on my part and I hope it helps.
Please continue since I do like this story alot and good fanfics are hard to find.
Cindygirl
You wanted suggestions on what could come next. Hmm, since the mating is being kept from Inuyasha then you can play it off that way. They can continue to hunt Naraku. I have no idea how long you want to make this story but you can have Inuyasha start gett suspicious of Sesshoumaru with Kagome. There could be a fight and Sesshoumaru saves Kagome where Inuyasha couldn't.
Then in the middle of the fight have him run off to Kikyou and then pick up on the fight once he comes back. Kagome could get really mad at him for complaining that Sesshoumaru had saved her where he had failed to do so. Then she could bring up the fact that he left her hurt to go after Kikyou.
This is just a suggestion on my part and I hope it helps.
Please continue since I do like this story alot and good fanfics are hard to find.
Cindygirl
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story. Please continue!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it all please contenue to update
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure that was your first lemon? That was spectacular. I am amazed. Please, please continue this. I cannot wait to see more chapters. I am about to go check out your other story right now.
It may be another week or two before I can even really work on Beloved Little Secreted by the way. The school year has just started up and all that, so I am busy with my new job and have a lot to do that is very time consuming, but I will have another chapter by hopefully next weekend.
How long have they been mated in this lemon though? At first (as I know you intended you tease LOL) I thought that this was going to be their initial mating, but it seems to have been going on for a bit.
It may be another week or two before I can even really work on Beloved Little Secreted by the way. The school year has just started up and all that, so I am busy with my new job and have a lot to do that is very time consuming, but I will have another chapter by hopefully next weekend.
How long have they been mated in this lemon though? At first (as I know you intended you tease LOL) I thought that this was going to be their initial mating, but it seems to have been going on for a bit.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter! I love the way he's already turned feral. One complaint thought. The chapter was FAR too short. So definitely continue, but please make the chapters longer.