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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. It's very passionate. The brevity actually enhances the story. This was great!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am breathless. What a lovely piece you have here. First off, don't change a thing. Secondly, do not -- I repeat -- do NOT make a sequel. This story is perfection just as it is. For you, who have rocked, I salute you!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I loved it. It kinda felt like it was in Kagome's POV. Perhaps do one more kinda like Sesshomaru's POV.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well writen. Very sad though. I wonder if there isn't more to say? But it is good, very good.