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March 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. I would love to see more
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, wonderfully written
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wowowow. This story definitely deserves more recognition, that's for sure.
Besides the well put-together raunchiness, I really appreciated how you mentioned through Kagome that Inuyasha wasn't acting like himself at all, it really made the story more convincing. Usually, in these types of stories where Inuyasha is made out to be an obsessive, horny freak, he always turn out to be unbearably out of character. But I really liked how you worked with it; you stayed true to his character. Keep up the fine work.
Besides the well put-together raunchiness, I really appreciated how you mentioned through Kagome that Inuyasha wasn't acting like himself at all, it really made the story more convincing. Usually, in these types of stories where Inuyasha is made out to be an obsessive, horny freak, he always turn out to be unbearably out of character. But I really liked how you worked with it; you stayed true to his character. Keep up the fine work.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!
Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.
Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/
The current nominations pages are here:
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Your story was nominated in the category Best Lemon
Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight).
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625
Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association
***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.
Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/
The current nominations pages are here:
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction)
http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart)
Your story was nominated in the category Best Lemon
Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight).
Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!
~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625
Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association
***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whew. that was hot. and im not saying that in any way, sense, or relation to paris hilton. -_-
but that was good, clearly enjoyed it. i think from reading majority of your stories so far, you have my favorite potrayal of inuyasha. =] i really do like.
thumbs up!
but that was good, clearly enjoyed it. i think from reading majority of your stories so far, you have my favorite potrayal of inuyasha. =] i really do like.
thumbs up!
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December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, how do you have so few reviews on this story? I, for one, thought it was fantastic.
I stayed up until 5AM reading this, given, I was chatting with my friends at the same time, and copy-pasting lines that I found rather funny. "Thick white liquids" aside... I would love to read more from you, and I plan on clicking your profile to see what else you have stashed, that I've missed in my time away from AFF.
I stayed up until 5AM reading this, given, I was chatting with my friends at the same time, and copy-pasting lines that I found rather funny. "Thick white liquids" aside... I would love to read more from you, and I plan on clicking your profile to see what else you have stashed, that I've missed in my time away from AFF.
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Loved it from start to finish. What's not to like when you've got Inu being so thoroughly possessive and jealous? Hojo just had to be there. LOL!! I don't blame Kagome for being confused by his actions. And she kept giving poor Hojo mixed signals. Inu -- dancing nasty at the club -- LOL!! And kag getting knocked to the floor and stepped on, -- didn't see THAT coming. Then they go home and she gets upset, and they accuse each other of wanting other people -- both of them wanting Sango -- ew! LOL!! Sending him to the gay bar! Buyo! That poor cat! LOL!! I was just rolling with it all. But Inu really needed to speak up and tell her he loved her first. I did SO love him insulting Kikyou. Music to my ears! Thank you very much. And then he made her yell at him to fuck her. I'm glad she finally realized that her family PROBABLY heard them. LOL!!! Oh, yes. I wouldn't want to have to face them in the morning. This was just wonderful.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty Keiko. . .but oh so delicious. What I would not give to have that sinfully scrumptious hanyou looking so hot and possessive of me. Damn. Good work. You should write another! :) Salute'!
Ja ne!
Ja ne!
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For a one shot hun that was amazing!!! That was so well detailly writen that I was blown away by your talent. I'm speachless as to how terrific it was. Thank you so very much for writing and I do hope that you'll write more here too. Keep up the creativity you have and that out standing nack for details. <3
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-grining evily- Well the insult contest was amusing, I find Sota's reaction even funnier. Poor boy. He's going to be scared for life. -gives completly unconvincing look of sympathy to Sota in cornor of room curled up in a ball muttering to self about having nightmares for the rest of his life and never being able to look at those 2 the same again- Can you add another chapter to this? Like when they wake up and have to go face the fireworks downstairs or where ever. It really would be funny to have Mrs. H give them The Talk. Then they could go back to the fudeal era and Miroku could peek in on what he thought was just Kagome and find them together. -grins- I think it would be great. Hope you consider it. ^_*