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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......I'm not sure what to think. I kind of liked it, but I kind of didn't. I'm not really into sad or darkfics, I love the idea though. Obviously there was only two true ways to write this fic. One was the path you chose and the second would have been to make it hilarious. I did enjoy the ending very much though. Also it was very well written and for the most part everyone was in character. I do enjoy your writing and will be looking for more of your work. Maybe even a darkfic or two
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story... i like inuyasha/kagome pairings... great work...
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is complete and total crap. Kikyou DOES love Inuyasha as much as Kagome does. The only time she hated him was from when she was resurrected until she discovered that Naraku was behind her death. After that, her main goal became destroying Naraku, not bringing Inuyasha to Hell with her. She wants Inuyasha to stay alive instead so he can be happy, even if she returns to Hell alone.
Anyways, other than your innacurate depiction of Kikyou and Inuyasha's feelings about her, nice fic. Personally, I'd like it if Miroku uses the sutras on Sango, then she berates him for it afterwards because he didn't need them. Then they go through their own thing and it ends with Miroku making love to Sango. But that's just me. :D
Anyways, other than your innacurate depiction of Kikyou and Inuyasha's feelings about her, nice fic. Personally, I'd like it if Miroku uses the sutras on Sango, then she berates him for it afterwards because he didn't need them. Then they go through their own thing and it ends with Miroku making love to Sango. But that's just me. :D