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Hehehe, welcome back! Excellent writing style, great humor, and hot citrus makes for a very satisfying oneshot. I can definately see your point on the characters' speach patterns. Also, it was enjoyable to see a fanfic that is current with the manga! Sesshy is having a hard time of it lately and its nice to see a fic where he retains his dignity despite what he's gone through. The conversation between Sesshoumaru and his mother was priceless too, a mixture of serious and snickers both.

I hope to read more from you in the future. Feel free to drop me an email if you wish to chat or such.
Warm regards
~ Northstar

That was an interesting spin on Sesshoumaru's sex-ed and he and Rin's first time. You have portrayed them both as very naieve here, and have done a good job. Nicely written.

great, great cure. that was done so right. i truly enjoyed how you did this. one of the best i have read between the two of them. very hot. great work.

Great conclusion! There was something indescribably sexy about Sesshomaru being a virgin... and touched for the very first time. Anyway, I loved it and I hope you make more great smut! :)

Hot, but handled very delicately. Full of laughs, especially at Sesshoumaru's expense! I enjoyed the long build up and the idea of Sesshy getting "the talk" from his mother, but you include a lot of wonderful character insights along the way. Well written and up to date on the recent manga as well. It's a solid fic all around, though at points I felt like Sessh was taking advantage of Rin's mental incompetence (um, like the kid with the very low IQ?), but we'll pretend she's only ignorant of sex. You'd think with all the traveling she'd have seen animals in the Spring, but for the sake of the fic, she's never seen what "the limb" is used for. Maybe Jaken always covered her eyes? A fun read.

lol, met the computer store in the sky. XD Honestly you've done better than I have in that factor. Same happend to mine and I have yet to get a new laptop. *claps for you* Great job on getting one so quickly hun.

You've done very well with this story. Not at all anything OC about the way you do things. Its like so in character and I'll say it again so very much updated with whatall has been going on in the maga series that I'm astoned. ^^

Thank you for writing in such detail and do please continue to write when ever you able. Thank you for sharing you talents hun.

kool cant wait for moer

love it ^_^ update soon

Great so far! I loved Sesshomaru's mom in this! Lol, there was something spunky about her in the manga and I think you brought that out perfectly! I hope you are preparing to serve the lemonade soon! :)

PLEASE update. They are soooo adorable. Who might have thought that HE is a VIRGIN!!!!!
What a refreshing contrast to all the other stories where he is the mighty sex god...
I loved how you pictured his mother. I can´t wait till you update!