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for The Sickness

by theMaven

person Srta Laila
schedule September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow, first I'm sorry about my bad english, I really hope you understeand. I just Love this fic so much, wow, this story is so hot and at same time all the characters are so lovely and sweet. This perspective of Sesshoumari not knowing what to do, and taken advices from his mom, is so cute and funny. I love the way both sesshoumaru and rin just don't know what to do when they are realy "doing", was so real. 

And I just want to say that I realy love the way that you write, and love yours fanfictions, the first I had read was the translate of In different Ligh in fanfiction,net, and I fall in love for all the story and the way the relationchip of Sess/Rin has grown. And wow you write the best hentai scenes that I have read in my life! 

person H4r4S4m4
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic so much! Probably the best Sessh/Rin fic I've read this far. Wonderful! *goes to read your other fics*
person orvida
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i find myself quite enjoying reading this story of yours and i hope to read many more stories from you in the furture.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that was one of the best Sesshoumaru/Rin Fan Fictions I have ever read. I read A lot of them, and rarely find them to keep my in a suspension of disbelief. You Have a wonderful Talent to keep it believable. I was even inspired to draw a sketch of them. I would love to be able to send it to you.
person perihawk
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome. I adored Sess' mom and the flow of the story. THANK you for writing.
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write Sesshomaru, and the scenes with him and his mother are really touching. It's nice to see him so unsure of himself, especially when he's usually the sex god. Well done, I really enjoyed it!
person Reymond
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes ! welcome back ! I’m very glad to read you again. (Sorry for my english, but I’m French you see ? I love Inuyasha’s characters too much I just had to read fanfics in engliss, which improved a lot, thank you to all the fabulous authors for that !)

You have such subtilities in your writing manners and lemon, I love it ! I have to say that for me “In a different light” is one of the best Inuyasha’s stories, with a Sesshomaru I see as one of the four or five best Sesshomaru’s character described between all the fanfics I already read !!! That’s true ! Sure, I have loved a lot of others, but never forgot the yours…
These I loved the most are from the following stories :
- “Across the ages” and “Chronicles of the West” by Inuyoukai8 ;
- “Conversations with a taiyoukai” by Demonlordlover on FF ;
- “Tales from the house of the Moon” by Resmiranda ;
- “Teaching Rin” by Avonnalay on FF
- “Passion” by CiraArana
- “Tortured love” by Rinseternalsoul ;
- “Kagome Where are you ?” by Jeffs

And in M/M section :
- “Domestication” by Amber Rose ;
- “Inglorious” and “Fraternal” by wickeD plUm.

Well, more than five in fact, mmm !
I hope to read you more, thank you to be here !!!

From a french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France,

Merely Truth

person OdietAmo
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that was utterly amazing. The writing was so beautifuly done, and the emotions were expressed fantastically. Thanks for sharing this with us.
person Brittany Sambrano
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing. You have talent.
~Brittany Sambrano
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh!!! Long time no chat, right?!?!
I thought you forgot about us peoples at AFF but apparently not!
I am such a huge fan of yours and have read your fics religiously! Hahaha =)
I guess I'm going to have to read the manga to fully understand the fic, but I loved it anyways!!
You are such an expert at portraying the characters. Down to a T!! I am just SOO amazed at how talented and wity you are!
I totally loved Sesshoumaru's mom. I've always wondered if someone could ever portray her so well and obviously you have!! I clap in the name of you. Hahaha *standing ovation*
I will always remain loyal to you and I hope you will write more soon.

=)