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for The Angel

by sexychick1800

person kaida
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a great story giong here, although your chapters are very short. How come Sesshomaru has taken such an interest in kagome? I hope to see some depth in the story soon! keep up the good work.
Kaida
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have tosay I love the story, but as a fellow writer, you might want to watch grammatical flaws as it destracts from the story as a whole. Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue plz!