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schedule
July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write smut well!!! so i ask for a mpreg and a continuation!!!!!!!! pleaSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
schedule
July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, definetly! I would love to see were this could go, mpreg or no (I'd prefer the mpreg!) BTW, you might like to check your grammer, I saw a few places that might need editing, other then that it was very well written!
Emily
Emily
schedule
July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and yes I would like to read more, and a preg inu would be fine with me.
schedule
July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The is great. A one shot, but it does promise more with the way you ended it. So I say, do more.
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was Hot! please continue, and I love the idea of a mpreg story.
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sure go for the mpreg. just don't take to long to update.... please
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes!!!!! mpreg!!
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy MPREG
lol, I bet you get what I'm thinking
Please keep it Uke!Inuyasha -puppy eyes-
lol, I bet you get what I'm thinking
Please keep it Uke!Inuyasha -puppy eyes-
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should turn it into a story. I would love to find out what happens between the brothers and the people around them when or if they become mates. M-prag is a deffent pluse if you want ot write one.
schedule
July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would be very interested in reading more of this story. And I myself am a big fan of mpreg. Please continue!