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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yes! a Mpreg....ooh goody
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would totally love Mpreg.
AND PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING, PLEASE!!!!!!
AND PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING, PLEASE!!!!!!
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The smut scene was hot and the ending was really sweet
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! MPreg? Hell yeah baby, give'em a litter! 3 maybe 4 at one time! Make sure they have atleast one girl. There must be a hime, for the Inu bros. to spoil!
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Please great story a few grammar mistakes but good nonetheless.
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...please do continue!!!
It was a pretty interesting chapter...But, why the title "a time to heal"??? it is because the time to heal all the battles between this couple...or what?!!!
It was a pretty interesting chapter...But, why the title "a time to heal"??? it is because the time to heal all the battles between this couple...or what?!!!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue. And I definitly vote for mpreg!!! yay! I enjoyed it for sure. So I implore you to continue!
snuggles, K.F.F.
snuggles, K.F.F.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would totally be interested in a mpreg they're my favorite. It was hot I loved it write more!!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let there be more
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hot.
if all you wanted was a PWP, then you can stop here.
but if you want a plot, you'd have to put a few things:
1) background - why is it a time to heal? are you referring to canon? the anime? the manga? is this au? as a reader of your fic - i dont know why it is a time to heal.
2) how did they get together? you started with a hot scene, but there was nothing much in the way of explaining why they are together. i mean, just because sess calls inu will suddenly be there.. unless you establish a basis.
3) mpreg is fine, but that's up to you. does it fit your story line? or are you going to make it fit your story line? that's fine too.
many mpreg fics deal with how the offspring would look like, what kind of powers, etc.
at any rate, wishing you luck in deciding. hope you go for the longer one.
i wish to know - how they got together, etc.
if all you wanted was a PWP, then you can stop here.
but if you want a plot, you'd have to put a few things:
1) background - why is it a time to heal? are you referring to canon? the anime? the manga? is this au? as a reader of your fic - i dont know why it is a time to heal.
2) how did they get together? you started with a hot scene, but there was nothing much in the way of explaining why they are together. i mean, just because sess calls inu will suddenly be there.. unless you establish a basis.
3) mpreg is fine, but that's up to you. does it fit your story line? or are you going to make it fit your story line? that's fine too.
many mpreg fics deal with how the offspring would look like, what kind of powers, etc.
at any rate, wishing you luck in deciding. hope you go for the longer one.
i wish to know - how they got together, etc.