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by kawaii0nnan0k0

person Anguloce
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh i like this!
person Noacat
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, lovely story. I really like it. The kiss at the end is nice. I do hope you have more chapters planned -- not that it'd be a shame to end it where you did, but it'd be nice to have more chapters.

One nitpick, though. If Sesshoumaru is as rich as I think he is, two thousand dollars is nothing. I mean, it's a lot to most normal people, but for the super rich -- not so much. The kind of jewelry the fabulously rich buy usually costs upwards of $20,000 -- yeah, I watch a bit too much tv about celebrities. I should stop... In any event, I thought I'd mention it, but it is your story after all -- so feel free to ignore me.

Thanks for writing this and I do hope you continue.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i like this story! please update soon ^_^
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is AMAZING! Please continue! =]